7.1.3 Editing your story
Remember that your short story has to be ready soon, so you should continue to review it, and start rewriting and editing it as necessary.
Editing your writing is very important – some would say the most important aspect of writing. It’s often said that anyone can write but only writers can edit. Now that you have written your first draft and left it to settle for a while, you will need to go back and reflect on what you have written, and make changes accordingly.
- Don’t be afraid to cut large parts of it if necessary.
- As we have already discussed, you might find that when you have got into the story you can go back and cut out the opening sentences. Remember the ‘Emma said’ exercises in Finding a voice [Tip: hold Ctrl and click a link to open it in a new tab. (Hide tip)] . Some openings may well have been used as a way to get into writing the story, or a particular passage, but the story might be more vibrant and enticing without them.
- Remember that you are aiming to develop a character who is complex and not too predictable.
- Remember that you are aiming to make the story as interesting and intriguing for the reader as you can.
- Reflect on all your reading and any tricks or techniques that you see in the novels and stories that might help you.
- Also reflect on the reading you’ve done that displays techniques and approaches that don’t seem, to you, to be working.